One piece of feedback I got for this draft, was to add character arcs and work on a 3 act structure within the extract.
For the final draft of my script, the changes I made included further use of parentheticals. This allowed me to better represent the story of my TV show by demonstrating the emotions of the character as well as giving better instruction for actors and directors. As well as this, I worked on adding a short character arc to the male characters in the extract to show the fear and enormity of the situation as they go from confident to scared.
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